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stories:chapter1 [2017/01/23 14:24] alxd add questions and ideas sections |
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- Put Samer from Palestine and Nawres from Iraq somewhere in there, as a bridge to the real world. They both work on similar projects in their respective hackerspaces. | - Put Samer from Palestine and Nawres from Iraq somewhere in there, as a bridge to the real world. They both work on similar projects in their respective hackerspaces. | ||
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+ | - Clash with [Cynic](characters:main:c_n1c)'s sexism in the first scenes, only to be heartened by his admiration for the work and technical excellency of her solutions. Make it so that doesn't look patronizing / doesn't make her lack a sense of agency. | ||
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+ | - Don't make the professor look like an arch-nemesis. He's just a guy with mindset narrowed by years in the academic structure and is pretty honest. Can we actually show the problem with Suz's project as a _systemic_ problem instead of just lack of good will of anyone? Maybe he actually _wants to help_, but his hands are tied? | ||
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+ | - _"Miss Suzanne, while I really see that you are passionate about your project, it doesn't qualify as a thesis. You have already passed last deadline and the only thing I can offer is joining a research team. Without that, you will have to wait with your thesis until next year. There is simply no other option."_ |